I’ve been struggling a bit of late. Part of that is due to our sixth lockdown, and part is due to the difficulties of writing one long story over a number of volumes.
The first volume is a joy because the world and its people are yours to create. The second volume is a pain in the proverbial because…some things are now set in stone. In other words, I’ve written things in the first volume that I cannot, must not stuff up in the second.
-sigh- And that, my friends, means doing some serious plotting.
At the moment, I’m back in book 1 of Vokhtah, trying to reconcile the timeline I created there. I wrote that there were only 51 days to go before the torrential rains of Kohoh stopped all travel. Therefore the ‘hero’s journey could only take 51 days.
Then I wrote about the character spending XX number of days at this spot and that spot and t’other. Unfortunately, I’ve just discovered that I’m three days short – i.e. if the journey follows a certain pattern, it will have taken 54 days rather than the allotted 51:

I can fix this shortfall, but I’ll have to adjust the map I originally created to show the route of the journey. This is what it looks like at the moment:

The dotted line marks the route…and now some bits have to be closer together to make everything fit…
Don’t judge me! I know exactly how anal this all sounds. 😦
Anyway, I’ll update the map etc in the next couple of days and explain why this level of detail is needed to get things right in book 2.
Stay well!
Meeks
October 7th, 2021 at 3:16 pm
[…] a bit of a perfectionist yet even so, I recently discovered that a guestimate right at the start of Vokhtah was not only wrong, it was very wrong. That, plus needing a […]
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September 1st, 2021 at 4:13 am
I remember when I had to figure out how long it would take to get from one place to another on foot, on ordinary horseback, and on horseback if you don’t mind riding your horse literally to death.
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September 1st, 2021 at 8:38 am
Gah…how did you do it? I know absolutely nothing about horses so can’t even imagine where you’d start.
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September 2nd, 2021 at 12:13 am
I have friends who either have or had horses. And I did what you do: I looked it up. And, to be honest, I fudged where I needed to. lol!
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September 2nd, 2021 at 11:03 am
-giggles- a friend had a horse called Jim. I sat on Jim once. That is literally the sum total of my horse-sense… -cough-
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September 2nd, 2021 at 9:56 pm
lol! I’ve done a couple of resort-type trail rides and regretted it every time. I do not have a “seat”.
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September 2nd, 2021 at 11:00 pm
It’s an art. And it’s a long way off the ground!
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August 20th, 2021 at 10:53 pm
This is so impressive, Meeks. I can barely keep track of a few characters and events in a single time and place, never mind this whole world-building thing you do. We all struggle with the pants vs plot thing, but you seem to have it down despite the angst (surely normal). Thanks for sharing some of your process!
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August 21st, 2021 at 1:46 pm
I am a wee bit anal, Mel. That said though, the problem only really becomes acute in the second, third or nth book. By then I believe we all have to find strategies for keeping things straight. Memory simply isn’t good enough.
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August 20th, 2021 at 1:49 pm
I feel your pain. 😀 I’ve had to go back to book 1 a gazillion times over the last week or so, even though I kept a pretty detailed tiimeline of events as I went, there are things coming up now in book 2 that I have to check, and make sure I’m not trampling all over ‘what has gone before’. 😀
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August 20th, 2021 at 9:16 pm
Commiserations, Widds. I swear, the /next/ trilogy I write [after I finish this long beast], I will complete the whole damn thing before I publish a single word. -sigh-
Good luck. -hugs-
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August 21st, 2021 at 12:21 pm
My thought exactly! 😀
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August 21st, 2021 at 1:19 pm
lol – famous last words. 😉
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August 20th, 2021 at 9:21 am
You will fix it Meeks, because there are things that snag the mind, or in my case, the eye. It’s being in control of the creative process.
BTW, I love your map ~ it’s an abstract combination of watercolour and embroidery!
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August 20th, 2021 at 9:25 am
lol – Anne! Welcome. I love both watercolour and embroidery, but mine is all digital. I’ve just posted a video about Tolkien, and how much of an all-round creative artist he was. I was gobsmacked by how beautiful some of his ‘reference’ art is, even now.
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August 20th, 2021 at 5:41 am
It’s hard to become a plotter.
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August 20th, 2021 at 8:47 am
It is, it is. 😦 I’ve actually taken to calling myself a hybrid, and I suspect that a lot of writers are hybrids too. In the end though, we all use whatever tools we need to tell a story as best we can. 🙂
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August 20th, 2021 at 5:18 am
Uff, I know how you feel. When it comes to continuity, the writer must care so the reader doesn’t have to *hugs*
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August 20th, 2021 at 8:49 am
Gah…yes! Absolutely spot on, Chris. We want to capture the reader and hold them, there, in that fictional space until the very last word. Any disconnect allows them to ‘escape’. Ahem. Bit of poetic licence there. lol
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August 20th, 2021 at 1:14 am
Um, will anyone pay that much attention? As long as the story’s cogent, the plot moves apace and the characters are engaging, micromanaging time? I don’t know.
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August 20th, 2021 at 8:54 am
-sigh- I think any reader with a decent memory will. Not deliberately, but something in the ‘flow’ with snag them with an irritating ‘hang on…’ I know, because it’s happened to me. Sometimes the detail is too small to worry about, but sometimes it really hits me over the head, especially if I read the second [3rd] book directly after the first.
In my case, an event in book 2 is going to reference something that has to have happened in book 1. So I really need to know exactly when that prior event happened. I have a bit of leeway, but I can’t fudge it. 😦
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August 21st, 2021 at 12:20 am
I definitely agonized over logical sequence when writing my novels. They were calendar based and took place over weeks and months. And I did build a timeline of event to keep track. I think though, that was just me. “Before” and “Soon” would have sufficed for the most part for much of the chronological nuance.
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August 21st, 2021 at 1:43 pm
lol – I agree that ‘before’ and ‘soon’ would probably be more than enough for most readers. The actual timeline and strict adherence to a chronological order are for us…so we don’t put a ‘before’ after a ‘soon’. 🙂
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August 22nd, 2021 at 1:17 am
Indeed!
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August 20th, 2021 at 12:17 am
I’ve been there. Well, not your “there,” but the “there” I was creating. Synching my plot with actual moon phases was incredibly fiddly, but it had to be done!
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August 20th, 2021 at 8:56 am
Kaching! lol I could hug you. 🙂 Yes, that is precisely the ‘there’ I mean. Such a small thing, and yet the phases of the moon are actually a way of describing the passage of time without beating the reader over the head with dates or whatever.
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August 20th, 2021 at 12:12 pm
Yes, and in a fit of… something, for the paperback version I added a little moon phase image at the beginning of every chapter. But that’s nothing compared to your model of your planet’s two suns!
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August 20th, 2021 at 9:17 pm
lol – I don’t know…the moon phases would be utterly unforgiving. The things we do, eh?
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August 20th, 2021 at 12:01 am
Yup. That’s the hard part about writing series, isn’t it? But adjusting the map is an easy fix. And I know just what you mean about being anal about it. Readers may not notice, but we know!
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August 20th, 2021 at 8:58 am
-grin- I should have known you guys would understand. Some writers do detailed character maps, and some of us do detailed world maps, or calendars of the phases of the moon etc. These are our building blocks. Without them the whole structure could come down in a heap. 🙂
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August 20th, 2021 at 9:21 am
It’s not like I haven’t had to fiddle with a map!
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August 20th, 2021 at 9:26 am
lmao – yes, your worlds are far too detailed not to have maps. 😀
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August 19th, 2021 at 11:25 pm
I know exactly where you’re coming from on this! I write long series and I’ve faced this same problem.
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August 20th, 2021 at 8:59 am
Yes! Because /we/ set the rules in the first book, and then we’re bound by them in each succeeding book! -hugs-
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August 19th, 2021 at 9:33 pm
The Morgan Library Museum (yes, the famous banker’s library is a museum complete with his book collection) had an exhibit a few years ago of Tolkien’s art as it related to his writing. He plotted, drew maps and characters… I’m so reminded of that in your process! https://www.themorgan.org/exhibitions/tolkien
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August 20th, 2021 at 9:05 am
Thanks, Candy! I knew Tolkien took something like 13 years to complete LotR, but I didn’t realise he went into such detail. In fact, I’ve been surprised by how similar my fellow writers are. I suspect we’re all hybrids in one way or another.
p.s. I loved the video so much, I’ve posted it for everyone to see. 🙂
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August 19th, 2021 at 5:38 pm
Wow! Thank you, Meeka! Very interesting for me. I am sure you will find a great way solving the problem. Best wishes! Please stay save, and well. xx Michael
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August 19th, 2021 at 5:52 pm
Oh! You’re on Twitter, Michael. I’ll have to try and follow you there. 🙂
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August 19th, 2021 at 5:36 pm
Reblogged this on OPENED HERE >> https:/BOOKS.ESLARN-NET.DE.
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August 19th, 2021 at 5:08 pm
We must always try to be as accurate as possible, for there will always be someone keen to point out any errors. We do it all the time when watching movies, seems we are all critics!
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August 19th, 2021 at 5:56 pm
Bless you! I know I’m like that, and I have this terrible fear that as soon as I slacken off, someone out there will notice and castigate me. So glad I’m not the only one.
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August 20th, 2021 at 4:52 am
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August 19th, 2021 at 4:19 pm
You have to make things work, or anything you hang on your scaffolding will also be wrong. I use both my calendars and a website that gives you the time of day in different places obsessively – my scene starts are in chronological order, and some are halfway around the world from the others.
Why? Because the plot needed it. I decided to do a Hollywood/Bollywood co-production, and it meant things had to be accurate to within a half hour several times.
And you can’t write things when you know your substrate is incorrect – it bugs you.
So do what you have to do, and when you use it next, it will be ready for you.
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August 19th, 2021 at 5:58 pm
-hugs- You have made me feel SOOOOO much better! I made a calendar/clock like that to track the difference between real world time and Innerscape time. Thank god for spreadsheets. 🙂
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August 19th, 2021 at 4:11 pm
I just did the same thing in my work in progress. No judgment here.
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August 19th, 2021 at 5:59 pm
lol lol lol High Five, Pete! I cringed when I hit the publish button but you guys are making me feel human again! Thank you. 🙂
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