First and foremost, Miira is now free on Amazon for five days from January 19 to January 23, 2021! You should be able to find Miira on your local Amazon. For those in the US, the link to Amazon.com is below:
And in case you’re still wondering whether you should add yet another book to your bulging TBR list, here is my last ‘favourite bit’ from Miira. This scene is shorter than the previous one, but not by that much, so apologies again!
Before you read the excerpt, you will need a little bit of context about the ‘suit’. It isn’t a jacket, vest and pants! Gaming in 2101 involves the use of full body ‘suits’ that contain sensors which help create a biofeedback system for the wearer. For example, if the Gamer stubs his toe, he/she will feel the bump.
The Teslasuit, shown on the left, is almost available already, but by the start of the next century, the best quality suits will have so many sensors embedded in the material that the Gamer is fooled into thinking he/she is experiencing the real thing. The top of the range ‘suit’ is the RT69 by Real Touch.
Read on:
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The rat-tat-tat of someone knocking on the door woke Lennie from a nap, and he started awake, heart pounding. Wha’ th’ fuck?
Nobody ever visited him at home. He made sure of that by keeping the address of his flea bitten kennel a close secret.
Rolling off the mattress, he grabbed the small table next to his bed and hauled himself upright as he tried to shake off the alcoholic fog that still clouded his thoughts. The only person who knew where he lived was the local pizza guy, but he had not ordered pizza. At least, he could not remember ordering pizza…
Gotta lay off the sauce a bit, he thought as he shambled towards the door, one hand scratching his crotch, the other rubbing the stubble on his chin.
When was the last time he’d shaved?
Lennie could not remember, but was not overly concerned. Life had been a very pleasant blur since the money came through, and he was not about to look a gift horse in the arse-
Bang, bang, bang.
“Okay, okay!” he cried. “I’m coming!”
Alcoholic fog notwithstanding, Lennie retained enough sense to check the view port before unlocking the door.
A woman wearing the bright red uniform of a courier stood outside, one hand raised to knock again. She would have been quite attractive had the red of her hair not clashed so badly with the red of her uniform.
She should dye it, Lennie thought as his eye dropped down to the woman’s other hand. It was holding the handle of a bright yellow trolley. On the trolley was a very big package with Real Touch written on it in electric purple lettering.
My suit! Lennie thought in delight as he quickly unlocked the deadbolt and the two padlocks securing his door. It was a cheap neighbourhood. It paid to be cautious.
“Lennie Huffnagel?” the woman asked.
“Yup, that’s me.”
“Authentication please.”As Lennie bent to press his thumb into the tablet held out to him, a whiff of his own body odour made him wince. He would have to have a shower before he tried out the suit. Bugger.
“Where do you want it?” the woman asked.
“Um, just sort of in the middle,” Lennie said, suddenly very conscious of the piles of dirty dishes, and even dirtier clothing, that covered almost every available surface. “Hang on, I’ll clear a space.”
“It’s okay,” the woman said with a quick grin. “My brother’s room is just the same.”
Matching action to words, she set the trolley down in the middle of the room and began feeding the dirty dishes into the recycler.
Lennie gave her a quizzical look but did his part by throwing the dirty clothes into a pile by the wall. Soon, an empty rectangle of floor beckoned to be filled.
Spinning the trolley around with a quick flick of her wrists, the woman deposited the box in the middle of the newly cleared space and stood back to admire her handiwork.
“Got a cutter?” she asked.
“It’s okay,” Lennie said, suddenly a little uncomfortable. “I can manage.”
“Oh,” the woman said, her animated expression drooping into disappointment. “Sorry. It’s just…I’m a gamer too, ya know? I saw the label and I was kinda hoping I could get to see the RT69 for myself…”
“You play?” Lennie asked, unease forgotten. “Whadya play?”
“Mega Dome,” the woman said with a slight blush.
“Nice,” Lennie replied, working hard to keep a condescending smirk off his face.Mega Dome was billed as a full contact martial arts game, but in reality it was just a fancy dating venue with a bit of slap slap thrown in to get people in the mood. He’d played it himself, before the agency picked him up and introduced him to real gaming. Still, the Ranga* knew enough to recognize a top of the range suit when she saw one.
Lennie gave the courier a quick but very professional appraisal as she stood in the middle of the room, clearly hoping to stay. She was not his type, far too fem with a small nose, small mouth and huge green eyes, but it would be fun to share the moment with someone who knew how awesome the suit really was.
“I’ll get the cutter,” he said.
The woman’s face lit up with pleasure, and Lennie suddenly felt quite warm towards her. If she played her cards right he might just give her a bit of slap slap himself.
My good deed for the day, he thought with a quiet chuckle as he ferreted around in the tiny food preparation area for the cutter.
When the woman finally left an hour later, Lennie lay on the mattress, his brand new suit fully connected and a look of terminal surprise on his face.
So why is this one of my favourite scenes? It’s because I’m fiercely protective of those I love, and I love Jaimie Watson, the only 18 year old Resident in Innerscape. Lennie Huffnagel betrayed Jaimie for money, so killing him off with his own ill gotten gains is poetic justice in my book. But I also love the colour red and characters with depth, so don’t expect the Woman in Red to be a simple anything. 🙂
A word of warning: I don’t write erotica or anything even approaching it, but I don’t pull any punches about ‘body functions’, so an earlier scene with Lennie may shock some people. Apologies in advance, but those scenes highlight the chasm that exists between the lives of the super rich, and those like Lennie who survive by exploiting them. Contrast is the key to everything.
I hope you’ve enjoyed seeing ‘Miira’ through my eyes. If you want to read the whole story, Miira, book 1 of Innerscape, is now free on Amazon until January 23, 2021.
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Meeks
January 22nd, 2021 at 2:13 am
I have a character named Huffnagel! It’s his first name, though. He’s one of the good guys in one of my mysteries-in-progress. 😀 LOVE the excerpt! You are one helluva writer, lady.
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January 22nd, 2021 at 7:38 am
-blush- thank you! And…great minds? I actually worked with someone called Huffnagel, although I think the spelling may have been slightly different. We weave stories from all sorts of bits and pieces, don’t we?
Btw, how’s the mystery going? The last one I read was the one about the dead guy in the summer house? Sorry, memory atrocious until I’ve had at least three coffees.
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January 20th, 2021 at 12:16 pm
One of the reasons your villains are so horrible, Andrea, is because they have os much power over the residents of Innerscape. The contrast between the extremes of power and helplessness creates huge tension. And Lennie is creepy on top of that. Great snippet.
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January 20th, 2021 at 3:14 pm
-giggles- They are, aren’t they? I did want to show though that more or less ordinary people can end up doing truly horrible things. I think, with a few exceptions, villains are made rather than born.
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January 21st, 2021 at 12:06 am
Yes, I agree totally, and sometimes small indiscretions can trap a character in a downward spiral where they make worse and worse choices to fix their problems. 😀
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January 21st, 2021 at 9:35 am
yes!!!!! To me that’s such a human thing.
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January 22nd, 2021 at 2:05 am
🙂 Are you still making progress on Vokhtah 2?
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January 22nd, 2021 at 7:41 am
Yeeeees. But it’s like pulling teeth. I have never struggled this hard with a story before, yet I know that it’s tight. -shrug- Sometimes I’d rather do the vacuuming than sit down to write. Other days I look up and wonder where the day has disappeared. Feel as if I’m on a see-saw.
How’s my mate, Briar going? lol I am never going to let you forget that mutiny. :p
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January 22nd, 2021 at 1:11 pm
Lol. I decided that I need to revise the first eleven chapters before I go farther. Hmph. Too many changes to depend on notes. 🙂
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January 22nd, 2021 at 2:44 pm
Ah yes…the downside, but well worth it!
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January 19th, 2021 at 10:02 pm
You and me both…lol x
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January 19th, 2021 at 8:54 pm
Tweeted, I’d recommend his book to anyone. Fascinating.
You know I mean it when I say it was a great read.
Huge Virtual Hugs
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January 19th, 2021 at 9:57 pm
Huge virtual hugs back at you, Daud! 🙂
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January 19th, 2021 at 8:24 pm
Pleased you don’t write erotica, Meeks loved the excerpt and looking forward to reading the book…Thank you x
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January 19th, 2021 at 9:59 pm
lol – couldn’t if I tried! I think I’d die of embarrassment. 😉
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