Author Candy Korman posted this article on Candy’s Monsters, and used Vokhtah as one of her examples. I am so chuffed I just had to copy/paste the whole article.
A Sense of Time & Place
Posted on May 16, 2013
When I read, I really enjoy a clear sense of time and place. This goes for all genres. If your ghost story is set in a lonely mansion on the coast of Maine during WWII — make sure I believe the setting is truthful and I’ll believe that the ghost is real, too.
I’ve recently read fiction by two new authors — new friends from blogging, Twitter & LinkedIn — and I’m pleased to report that these two entirely different writers have both produced settings that were vivid and so real that the characters actions ring true.
As I don’t review books on this blog and don’t want to start. I’m not going to do full out reviews of “Such is Life” and “Vokhtah.” I will simply use both of these new books as examples of the best use of distinctive settings.
In her science fiction book “Vokhtah” A. C. Flory invites the reader to a hostile planet “peopled” with creatures best described as winged sociopaths with Machiavellian motivations, a fully-realized cultural mythology, a hierarchic society and an unusual manner for procreation. Vokhtah is a brutal planet and survival of the fittest (shrewdest, most devious & cunning) code underpins all the characters interactions.
The sense of place is so clear and finely drawn that the actions of the characters flow as a consequence of where they are in geography and the rigid caste system of the planet. A less complete environment might have made the creatures a bit comical or, worse, two dimensional. A.C. Flory’s achievement is in creating a credible, incredible world.
Jeri Walker-Bickett didn’t have to create her lonely landscape — she found it in various locations here in the United States. Her hyper-realistic short story collection “Such is Life” is set in a range of places — a suffocating small town in Montana, New Orleans, a suburban community determined to protect their children from outside influences, etc. It’s America today.
In each story, the sense of time and place anchors the story. The story “Leaving Big Sky” begins in a laundromat. The protagonist is watching laundry tumble in a dryer because, unlike the laundromats in Butte, this one has no TV, magazines and coffee to keep people entertained. The sense of abject loneliness is so much a part of the environment that the author doesn’t have to tell the reader what John is feeling. We feel it with him. The squeaky clean town in the story entitled “Not Terribly Important” hides a cruel streak of bigotry beneath its family friendly veneer. For a moment I wanted to shake the protagonist’s shoulders and tell her that the writing was on the wall.
By inviting the reader into specific and coherent environments, both of these authors give their characters real places to come to life.
For those who may not have read Candy’s own writing, she creates thoroughly modern stories inspired by classic ‘monster’ fiction such as Bram Stoker’s Dracula. And when Candy talks about ‘time and place’ it’s because she herself is a master at making the incredible feel utterly real.
Cheers from Meeka doing her happy dance. 🙂
May 18th, 2013 at 5:26 pm
“Clear and finely drawn..” Yay for you! 😀
(She’s so right.)
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May 19th, 2013 at 12:02 am
-blush- Thank you. I had no idea what that article would be about.
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May 18th, 2013 at 7:13 am
Candy synopsises the time and place of Vokhtah perfectly. When a writer gets it right, as you did, the reader gets a tangible sense of shift into that place, and regret & tug back when leaving…
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May 19th, 2013 at 12:06 am
That is certainly what we hope for. -hugs-
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May 18th, 2013 at 4:07 am
Woot! It’s nice to see what company Candy has put my writing in. Her great un-review made my day too!
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May 19th, 2013 at 12:07 am
You’re now officially on my TBR list!
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May 18th, 2013 at 2:06 am
The best un-review I have ever read.
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May 19th, 2013 at 12:07 am
lol – Thanks on Candy’s behalf. 😀
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May 18th, 2013 at 12:52 am
Wow!
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May 19th, 2013 at 12:07 am
🙂
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May 18th, 2013 at 12:43 am
I had to look up chuffed!
(It’s not used here in the States, but I may start using it and see what happens.)
Now, I can say that I’m chuffed about your re-posting and I hope that readers appreciate the effort good writers put into creating credible TIME & PLACE especially when the stories are fantastic or magical in nature.
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May 19th, 2013 at 12:09 am
Hey we could start a trend here! I think chuffed originally came from the Brits but it’s a great word. 🙂
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May 18th, 2013 at 12:41 am
I keep thinking how nice it would be to make another chapter in the series aimed at being a point and click adventure game 😀
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May 19th, 2013 at 12:10 am
Hmmmm…. I just happen to know someone who can model flying things, well planes… How’s your rigging these days?
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May 18th, 2013 at 12:01 am
Happy un-review Snoopy dance!
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May 19th, 2013 at 12:11 am
Snoopin’ right back at you 🙂
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May 17th, 2013 at 11:56 pm
Happy dancing with ya, Meeka!
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May 19th, 2013 at 12:11 am
1-2-3, 1-2-3… and…. 😀
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May 17th, 2013 at 11:51 pm
What a great un-review and how well she put things. A master of her craft talking about a master of yours.
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May 19th, 2013 at 12:12 am
-grin- Any more of this and I’m going to be blushing until xmas! -hugs-
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May 27th, 2013 at 4:15 pm
Go right ahead! You deserve it! 😀
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May 27th, 2013 at 10:25 pm
lol – thanks. 🙂
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